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  发布于2014-04-08   教育   公开   参与人数:23
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  • caro 2014-04-08 10:40
  • iris 2014-04-08 10:48
    In the recent years, many college students have a part-time job, and it seems to be a popular trend. However, as to doing part-time job, different people have diffent opinions. Some think it has more advantages than disnvanteges; others insist that doing a part-time job is a kind of waste of time. As far as I am concerned, taking a part-time job is beneficial for our college students. The reasons can be listded as follows.
  • HQM 2014-04-08 10:54
    Recently,there are more and more students doing a part-time job during their spare time,which arouse a firce debate whether it's useful or not.Someone thinks it's a profitable experince,while others think it's just a waste of time and energy.As to me,I prefer the fomer that doing a part-time job is good for our life experience.
  • 盖甜 2014-04-08 10:55
    Part-time job:
    Nowadays,part-time job prevails among the college. Therefore, whether students ought to possess a part-time job triggers heated discussion in publice.Some people believe that it not only is conducive to physical and mential development but also can earn some allowance.But,others think that it may well waste ample time for students. Personally,I am inclined to take up part-time job.
  • 邓然 2014-04-08 10:55
    Time gose by, more attentions are paid to how to make the money. Whether teenagers should take part time jobs has been discussed for a long time. Some people think it is a great opportity for youngth to touch the society and open their eyes, while others argue that it just makes teenagers become the slaves of the benifit and it also wastes times. In my opinion, I think it is a good choice for teenagers to take part time jobs, here are my arguments.
  • 刘梦雨 2014-04-08 10:57
    Nowadays, doing part-time job becomes a popular choise among students.  Some believe that they can get both money and social experience from it. However, others hold quite opposite opinion. They argue that students' most important mission is study and doing part-time job is a waste of time. Personally, I think the former is more convincing.
  • wsy 2014-04-08 10:58
    For many campus student ,doing a part-time job is a trend . But different people have diffent opinion about it.Some one thinks that it is waste of time and has no meaning ,while others think it can bring mony and help students to improve social experience .In my opinion , during part-time job ,students can harvest many things.
  • 麦迪小伟 2014-04-08 10:58
    Recently follows a craze in doing partime job which arouse a heated debate in our society.some are favourable for this new oppotunity in that we can benefit a lot from the experience.While others hold a diffirent attitude that partime job will eliminate our sparetime and disattract our attention. weighing up the pros and cons, I would give my vote for the former one.My reasons can be listed as follows.
  • ppp 2014-04-08 10:58
    Should college student be encourage to take part-time job?  People's views on this issue vary from one to another.Some people think that it is reasonable to take part-time job to gain working experience and interpersonal skills ,while others hold that taking part-time jobs does harm to the college students.Personally ,although there are some advantage of taking part-time job,I still think take part-time job does more harm than good.
  • wtl940428 2014-04-08 10:58
    Because of the lack of pocket money or some other reasons, part-time job has attracted adolescents’ attention. For sure, taking a part-time job strength teenagers and enhance their abilities; on the other hand, it’s kind of wasting time and distract them from their faculty. However, in my opinion, taking part-time job should be critical and select the proper time to do the right things.
  • 王蓉 2014-04-08 10:58
    Nowadays ,should collegue students doing part-time jobs has become a hot topic in our society.some pepole argue that doing part-time jobs is benifit for students developing a hard working spirits.But as far as i'm concerned ,students shouldn't doing part-time jobs in their collegue life.
  • 吴恩仲 2014-04-08 10:59
    Part time job
    Currently,with the price of the necessities growth fast.The demanding desire of the money make people have to find some good jobs .The college studenys chose  the other way finding a part-time job,which can make them feel better in the school life.
  • caro 2014-04-08 11:00
    iris: In the recent years, many college students have a part-time job, and it seems to be a popular trend. However, as to doing part-time job, different pe
    to do  part-time jobs among the students has become a popular trend...
  • 小伦泡的茶 2014-04-08 11:01
    Part-time job, as some independent ideas in society, is becoming more and more important but controversial.Some of them argue that students make money and gain meaningful experiences through part-time job. For all benefits that part-time job have,others hold quite opposite opinions.Students spend much time on it and ignore thier studying.In my care, part-time job is a helpful thing if we treat it as a correct manner.
  • caro 2014-04-08 11:02
    HQM: Recently,there are more and more students doing a part-time job during their spare time,which arouse a firce debate whether it's useful or not.Someon
    Recently, the phenomenon that students go to do part-time jobs has arouses a fiece debate.
  • caro 2014-04-08 11:04
    盖甜: Part-time job:
    Nowadays,part-time job prevails among the college. Therefore, whether students ought to possess a part-time job triggers heated discus
    ...doing part-time jobs prevails in the college, which triggers heated discussion among the public.
  • 曾婧怡 2014-04-08 11:04
    Part-time job play a significance role in this modern society.All students around the world are faced whether choose“ a part-time job”.For students,part-time job bring waste time.However,some people argue that while students do more part-time job,it has also brought students more experience and money .Personally I would prefer later opinion.
  • 王静文 2014-04-08 11:05
    Some people think there are more advantages for colleges students to take part-time jobs than disdvantages, but others don’t think so. A serious problem has arisen in recent several years that more and more college students abandon study because of their taking part-time jobs. In my opinion, bringing more balance to a student’s life, part-time job can broaden people range of experience.
  • lvjin931117 2014-04-08 11:05
    Doing a part-time job has become a wild-spread choice among our college students in recent years. Some students takes it as great opportunity to gain practical skills and social experience, while others see it as a distraction of their schoolwork.. weighing up two arguments, I personally tend to the former one.
  • caro 2014-04-08 11:05
    邓然: Time gose by, more attentions are paid to how to make the money. Whether teenagers should take part time jobs has been discussed for a long time. Som
    第一句话可以去掉。。。。。 and here are some arguments.
  • 李梦佳 2014-04-08 11:06
    李梦佳201213060111
    More and more college students use their spare time on part time job now. After there casul day in school, they go to café or supermarket and serve to customers. Tt will benefit them a lot to communicate with others and they also can improve their life level with the salary.  But amount of parents concern about it, they think that part time job would hold up their study or cause other aftermath.
  • 刘金玉 2014-04-08 11:07
    When it comes to part-time job, different people have different uses on it .Students need money in their daily life,but it may not enough for them with their alimony when they want something else. Adults need money to support their life and their family,it may be hard for them if they are just concentrate on one job. So part-time job is a good solution toward this problem.
  • caro 2014-04-08 11:07
    刘梦雨: Nowadays, doing part-time job becomes a popular choise among students.  Some believe that they can get both money and social experience from it. Howe
    ... a popular trend among...
  • 唐七奇奇 2014-04-08 11:07
    Entering college, large amount of students can't wait to prove their independence. Doing part-time is usually the first choice, triggering a burning discussion.Views on this issue differentiate from person to person. To me , I consent its advantages overweight disadvantages.
  • 韩悦新 2014-04-08 11:07
    Nowadays,whether students in college should take a part-time job has become a big conconcerning among the public.Well, I am in favor of the opinion that shudents should take a part-time job.
      Some people think that taking a part-time job is a good thing,but others don't think so.In my opinion,part-time job can help students accumulate more social experiences,expecially for students who are going to graduate and look for job soon.
    What's more,we can earn money by ourselves,it's a meaniful thing.
  • caro 2014-04-08 11:09
    wsy: For many campus student ,doing a part-time job is a trend . But different people have diffent opinion about it.Some one thinks that it is waste of ti
    For many campus student ,doing a part-time job is a new trend. 第一个but 用的太突然,请删掉
    obtain social experience...
  • caro 2014-04-08 11:10
    麦迪小伟: Recently follows a craze in doing partime job which arouse a heated debate in our society.some are favourable for this new oppotunity in that we can
    Recently a craze iof oing partime job  arouses a heated debate in our society.
  • Vendy 2014-04-08 11:12
    Part-time job are always a hot topic in the university. Many of students are willig to find a part-time job during their shcooling life. In their view,taking part in a part-time job not only can make a little fortune by themselves, but also can enrich their social experiences and studying life. However, other of students argue that, it is a unwise idea to have part-time job. It will waste cherish time so that they cann’t study well.. In addition of this, it may harm students’ health and lead to much unnecessary stress.
  • 鲍笛 2014-04-08 11:12
    Nowadays,doing part-time job has  become more and more popular in the college.Therefore,some discuss about whether students should take a part-time job has bacome a big concern among the public.Some people think students can gain more experience from doing part-time job.However,some people think students should put their enengy into study rather than doing part-time jod.Personally,it is benefical for students doing proper part-time job.
  • 张雨绯2 2014-04-08 11:14
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    Part-time job
       Nowadays part-time job has become a big concern in rencent social life.For this problem different people have different opinion with it.Some sududents think part-time job can improve their ability.But some others consider that part-time job maybe affect their normal life and they rather do something they interest in. Personally,I woule prefer the first viewpoint because I think part-time job is an pregnant part of our teenage life.
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