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2014601作文训练2-段落写作

  发布于2014-04-15   教育   公开   参与人数:19
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Doing part- time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers.
 
[1] topic sentence
[2] explanation
[3] example
[4]conclusion
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  • caro 2014-04-15 11:04
  • ppp 2014-04-15 11:08
    Firstly,Doing part-time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers. Students apply their knowledge to practical problem through doing part-time jobs.For instance,student who doing major-related part time job will have first hand experience on the latest development of their field,which they will never be able to get from the textbook.Therefore,taking part time job can be more benefical for the sake of variety,finiancial,and improve their interpersonal skills and working experience.
  • HQM 2014-04-15 11:21
    Doing part-time job will help stugents gain neccessary quality for their futrue careers.We need improve our ability not only in the school
    but the society.The students always don't know how to live a good life as well as they can.I think they should make good use of their spare time.Through the way to do a part-time job,we can enrich our extracurricular activities and gain social comptence.Moreover,Many students comlain that they can't get a high profile job becuse they don't have a working experience.Doing a part-time job will be benefit to some degree.It seems that doing a part-time job is very optimum.
  • caro 2014-04-15 11:22
    ppp: Firstly,Doing part-time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers. Students apply their knowledge to practical problem t
    Therefore,taking part time job in helpful to enrich the students social experience. improvoing their interpersonal skills and working experience.
  • iris 2014-04-15 11:23
    As a college student,we should have constructive long-term prospective for our future, thus part-time job is a very precious experience to us.this experience will give you a lesson that what company structure is ,what necessary skills we should possess and how to make a good impression to your employers, as are the possible problems you might confront in future.take my sister  example, she had gone various prt-time jobs during her student’s life, these job experiences make her easy when her land a job. Therefore, doing a part time is benefical to college students, and at least we can gain some necessary quality in our furure careers.
  • 刘梦雨 2014-04-15 11:24
    Doing part- time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers. It can arouse their awareness of the importance of cooperation. Furthermore, part-time jobs can make them think and act maturely. They are not communicating with their friends and classmates anymore when they are doing part-time jobs. So they must be a good cooperator. Society is much more complicated than school. Students will know that being reckless doesn't work.  In a word, doing part-time jobs could be advantages when they seek for works.
  • caro 2014-04-15 11:25
    HQM: Doing part-time job will help stugents gain neccessary quality for their futrue careers.We need improve our ability not only in the school
    but the so
    We need to improve our ability not only in the school
    but in society.
  • 吴恩仲 2014-04-15 11:25
    Doing part-time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers.Students have not enough time to get a whole day job,but part-time job may take them a good chance to earn their money and get the experience for their future work.Such as the will learn how to get along with different people in different ways and get well with them.In a word, doing part-time job can make you benefit a lot in the social life
  • 王静文 2014-04-15 11:26
    Doing part-time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers. As a social activity, a part-time job certainly offers college students substantial practice, after they graduate and can get their work posts. And income earned from part-time jobs can solve their financial problems, especially for those who come from poor family. Moreover, with part-time jobs, college students can study many knowledges beyond they have learned from their books.  
  • 鲍笛 2014-04-15 11:27
    Doing a part time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers.From doing a part time job ,students can acquire the experience that how to get along with people and how to slove things effectively.Moreover,some students even can practice their professional knowledge from doing a part time job and it will be an important experience for them to find a job in the future.More experiences of doing a part time job will help students to find a better job in the future.
  • caro 2014-04-15 11:27
    iris: As a college student,we should have constructive long-term prospective for our future, thus part-time job is a very precious experience to us.this ex
    to us, which will give one some ideas of a company structure.
  • 韩悦新 2014-04-15 11:28
    Doing part- time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers.Through a part-time job,students can get lots of opportunties to communicate with other people and adapt this society as sonn as possible.For instance,an introvert student who is very shy and afraid of communicating with others more likely become braver than before after taking a part-time job.apparently,this is an precious experience  for her.So,I think doing a part-job is very important for students.
  • caro 2014-04-15 11:28
    刘梦雨: Doing part- time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers. It can arouse their awareness of the importance of cooperati
    Good!
  • 曾婧怡 2014-04-15 11:28
    First,Even though some people are reluctant to treat an issue from different angle.Thy cannot deny that part- time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers.Student can learn responsibility with almost everything they can do because  almost every mistake has a consequence,.To elaborate: whether it is a warning from a boss for be late or,in more severe cases,being fired for repeated mistakes.In addition,student are cooperating with others which mean that they cann’t do whatever they want. In school,however,student don’t have many chances to learn about responsibilities and consequences.
  • ppp 2014-04-15 11:29
    First, doing part-time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers. They can learn how to deal with the relationships between colleagues and bosses through this experience. For example, they can understand what they shoud do while their boss is angry and they can handle the difficulties while their work-mates are confusing. In a word, there are more advantages than disadvantages to do a part-time job.刘金玉
  • 李臣君 2014-04-15 11:29
    Doig a part-time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future. Nowadays, doing a part job become quite common among students,and never have a part-time job might indicates that you lack some specific skills or important experience. Because,only when you have experienced a part-time, you’re able to understand the most bacis social rules and the essential qualities which we need during occupation. Thus comes the most rational conclusion that part-time job can develop your quality for th future.
  • 邓然 2014-04-15 11:29
    Doing part- time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers. That means they can get knowledge and skills for the jobs they are interested in at early times. Moreover they can make better acquaintances to variety of works. Take Steve Jobs for an example. He used to take part time jobs in some computer companies by selling his devices and softwares at his college time. That gave him lots of experiences and made him become a great man in the future. So, I can not deny that doing part time jobs really helps students alot, it may shows us a bright way to seccess and make our lives valuable.
  • caro 2014-04-15 11:29
    吴恩仲: Doing part-time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers.Students have not enough time to get a whole day job,but part-
    Students have not enough time to get a whole day job这句话不是太需要
  • wsy 2014-04-15 11:30
    First ,they can accumulate their work experience. When students take a part time job ,they can learn how to get on well with their partner and  boss. As well as how to solve the emergency . Second, doing a part time job can let college students make a contant with the cociety in advance.During these time,they can know that the compete in a company is intense and the money is difficult to be earned. In a word, we can get many other ability which we can't acquire in class. So in my opinion, doing a part time job is needful.
  • caro 2014-04-15 11:30
    王静文: Doing part-time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers. As a social activity, a part-time job certainly offers colleg
    , after they graduate and can get their work posts表达不太清楚,可以删掉
  • caro 2014-04-15 11:30
    王静文: Doing part-time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers. As a social activity, a part-time job certainly offers colleg
    文字还不错
  • caro 2014-04-15 11:30
    鲍笛: Doing a part time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers.From doing a part time job ,students can acquire the experie
    Not bad!
  • caro 2014-04-15 11:31
    韩悦新: Doing part- time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers.Through a part-time job,students can get lots of opportunties
    Not bad!
  • 关典 2014-04-15 11:31
    Doing part time job will help students to gain necessary quality for their future career. Because students can get many experience from the part time job, which they have done. I believe that part time job can make you become more mature than before. You can learn how to deal with the person's relationship and how to work efficiently and so on. For example my classmate take a part time job in KFC. His job is helping to fry fries. He knows how to cook it but I don't. That is the experience what he get. And he also learned how to communicate with consumers. It's very helpful for us to do a part time job. It's not only can help you to get pocket money but also good for your future career.
  • tracy1116 2014-04-15 11:31
    Doing part- time job will help students gain necessary quality for his future careers. It is significant that students get the social experience as well as good study. A part-time can make it and matter his life in the future. For example, if he is on the interview against his opponents. he has a part-time experience while others not. It is his advantange and he will probably seize the opportunity to get the job. Therefore, the essential qualities you’ve got can almost attributed to the experience that part-time job bring to you.
  • 唐七奇奇 2014-04-15 11:32
    Doing part- time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers.They are surrounded by amature persons and they will learn  how to get along with the grow-ups. At the same times, they will get used to some social rules. For example, as a advertisement assistence, you are supposed to be politely as well as friendly to your clients. With communicating, you should properly figuer out what they really want about advertisement. To summarize, students could obtian crucial skills for heir future by part-time job.
  • 李梦佳 2014-04-15 11:32
    There are many advantages of doing part-time job. The most prominent benefit is that doing part-time job will help students gain necessarry quality to their future careers. When they have experience of job in there college, they will improve their capacity of communicative and operation, it will also paractice their patiece of serveing. On the basis of investigation , people who have experience of doing part-time job will be more patient and optimistic than the others. So if you are not patient and heve difficulty in communication, it I really a wise choice to do a part-time job.
  • caro 2014-04-15 11:32
    曾婧怡: First,Even though some people are reluctant to treat an issue from different angle.Thy cannot deny that part- time job will help students gain necess
    First,Even though some people are reluctant to treat an issue from different angle.Thy cannot deny 简化为We can never deny that
  • 小伦泡的茶 2014-04-15 11:32
    Doing part-time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers.According to the reports, the emplyees who took part-time job in their school-days may have superiorities in communication and executive capacity.It means they not only make money,but also obtain precious experiences through part-time job.Whatever we do, we practice in society so that we learn lots of things which is diffenrent from the knowledge in books.Therefore, it  is quite imperative for students to study in varous places besides of schools.
  • 盖甜 2014-04-15 11:32
    60116盖甜:
    Doing part- time job will help students gain necessary quality for their future careers.Because this offers an great opportunity to contact with society.For instance,you will enabled to make ample friends who come from different fields of work.Captalizing on exchanging different ideas,you not only expand your scope of knowledge but also enhance the ability of communication.These merits help you reckon with various problems in the near future. Therefore,it is undeniable that doing part-time job exerts conducive impacts on our furture careers instead of squandering our time and energy.
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